Haley McCormick

In this article, the reporter did a good job about knowing his stats and using hand motions to add excitement to what he was saying. I think the could have done better addressing the "who" "what" "where" "when" "why" because he never really addressed who he was talking about. Also, the big topic was how is Mason Rudolph going to hold up against TCU and he never told us when the game would be. I think it would have been better if he told us when this big match up would be taking place. In the future I will remember to add hand motions to add more excitement to what I am saying. I will shorten the important stats so I can speak the important news faster. OSU Cowboys Article

The reporter did a good job of stating the “who” “what” “where” “when” and “why” in the first sentence. Without having to have any background knowledge, I knew within the first sentence that it was talking about Ezekiel Elliott's suspension for his domestic violence act.  I think the reporter could have added a little more detail about how many games he was originally suspended for and expand a little on the domestic violence act. Who was it? A child or a woman? We don’t know from this article. We are able to figure this out by reading different articles, but I think the article would be better if we had an idea of who it was, especially if we haven’t heard about this case. I will take from the article that I should get to the point fast, answering the five W’s right of the bat so that the reader knows what I’m talking about. I will also be sure to add extra detail to the story if it is needed to help the reader better understand the paragraph. Click the link bel